Monday, January 29, 2018

HOW TO IMPROVE OUR WRITINGS Genís F. (2 BTX A)

How can I improve my writing?

Last week our teacher returned us our English exams. The grades were generally very high and the teacher was proud of our improvement. However, she was surprised of the compositions we’d done on the exams. 

According to her, in all English compositions we’re continuously repeating the same mistakes, which are often as absurd as creative our imagination is. So, the teacher decided to dedicate a class to talking about it because we can’t go on in this every day more competitive academic world committing such an amount of faults. When that class was coming to an end, she proposed us to write a composition about how to write a composition (sorry for the redundancy. Do you see? We shouldn’t write like this on a composition). So, she suggested to us to make a composition about how we could improve it on an exam or at any of our weekly wonderful compositions.

  First of all, I think the best way of improving how we write a composition is bettering our basic skills like vocabulary or grammar. I really consider it to be necessary to improve it because almost every word you write on a composition is related to vocabulary or to grammar and, although we’ve been studying all this for a long time now, we still lack of the quality required in the best writings.

Furthermore, we need to focus on concrete aspects too. We should avoid adding sentences to a paragraph if they are not related with its topic because it makes incoherent the resulting text. So, we shouldn’t forget to expand our topic on every sentence we write.

 Otherwise, it’s also very important to make a good introduction because it’s the first contact the reader has with the writing, so it’s decisive to seduce her or him from the beginning. I really think that the introduction serves as a general outline of the essay but I don’t think we should introduce on it the aspects of every paragraph. What I consider is that we should write about the global topic of the composition starting with a topic sentence. I mean we should begin the introduction (and, therefore, the composition) with an interesting situation that’s happened to us and that has leaded us to write the essay. Well, at least, it’s one of the tricks I use.

 Finally, the conclusion should be a very short synthesis of the writing which can include, at the very end, a reflexive statement that makes you think about the essay’s topic even when you’ve finished reading the composition. So, let’s try it.

 To sum up, to write a nice essay we need to enlarge our knowledge of vocabulary and to improve our grammar skills, we should be coherent and we should be continuously advancing with the topic, we should start the writing with an introduction that begins with a topic sentence and finishes with an interesting global outline of the composition, and, finally, we should finish our text with a synthetic conclusion like this. At the end of the day, a composition is a chance of expressing our ideas, our opinions or our worries. So, in my opinion, it’s very important to be skilful when we want to express something because, otherwise, we’ll be always silent at society’s eyes.

Genís Fibla i Costa
2nd BATX A


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